I thought I would do Teaser Tuesday differently today. Here I post a poem of mine, which I wrote yesterday. Yes, I do write poetry. Infact I consider myself a poet first and then anything else. Why I called this a teaser? Because I want you all to be teased enough to visit my poetry blog, rooted and read it regularly.
musty scent of love
those old notes- yellowed,
in tatters, words smudging
I tape them carefully
to preserve them for you both
it is not quite dawn yet-
what am I doing in the wee hours
going through old letters
taking in the musty scent of your love
you know she sleeps in the next room
I don't wish to wake her up
like the way you were
ever so careful not to disturb her
what I see through my hazy vision
your words lovingly penned for her-
her words reciprocating,
my heart aches for her loss
I am no connoisseur on recipe of love
(but I know) she is still spellbound by you,
you can see that from up there,
but she cannot and that hurts her
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When I get glimpses of my mom missing my dad, it hurts me too. She is careful not to show it to me but as her daughter, I understand how much she misses him. I miss him too but it is different for her. As it should be. As it ought to be. I always have wished for a love as strong as theirs. I write it for both of them, even though I know she will not like it that I can read her so well.
May I remind you, yet again, to visit my poetry blog, rooted? Thanks!
26 comments:
I love this poem. I will definitely visit your poetry blog.
Nice. You do have a lovely talent.
Lovely poem, and sweet. Thank you.
This poem is very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
The poem is bittersweet, but, lovely.
I did visit your blog rooted, and enjoyed it. I will add it to my blogroll.
Your personal poetry teaser is beautiful. I will have to make a note to visit your poetry blog.
http://readwithtea.blogspot.com/2010/08/tuesday-teasers.html
Beautiful poem. You have a lovely writing style.
wow. thats talented!
Here's my teaser:
Teaser Tuesday #7 - Maker's Song 1- Rush of Wings
Cheers,
Dee
That is awesome. Brought tears to my eyes even before I read your insights. Well done!
Wow! You are really talented. The poem is beautiful.
My teaser
http://books-love-affair.blogspot.com/2010/08/treasured-tuesdays-and-teaser-tuesdays_10.html
Misha
That was lovely! I will definitely visit your poetry blog! Thanks for sharing such a personal moment from your family.
That resonated with me...I will definitely visit the poetry blog.
Here's my teaser:
http://rainysnowday.wordpress.com/2010/08/10/teaser-tuesdays-19/
This is really good. Thanks for sharing this with us.
One word...beautiful!!
CMash
Beautiful poem, so heartfelt and sad but such a wonderful tribute to their love.
I'm so glad this was your teaser! It's beautiful! I will definitely visit your poetry blog.
Wow. I loved that. Thank you for sharing it.
You write beautifully!
That was a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing!
Lovely teaser. I'll definitely be visiting your poetry blog!
That was beautiful. I could feel the emotion drawn from your mother. I almost could smell that musky scent as well.
Very beautifully written.
This is a beautiful poem! You are very talented. Thank you for inviting us to your poetry blog. I'll be stopping by soon.
Thank you for this lovely poem.
~ Amy
A woman of many talents!
My teaser is here
I like your teaser idea! and great poem
Lovely poem. Thank you for stopping by. Mine's from The Lace Reader by Brunonia Barry.
Lovely teaser! ^^ *clicks "follow"*
Thanks for dropping by mine! :)
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