I thought I would do Teaser Tuesday differently today. Here I post a poem of mine, which I wrote yesterday. Yes, I do write poetry. Infact I consider myself a poet first and then anything else. Why I called this a teaser? Because I want you all to be teased enough to visit my poetry blog, rooted and read it regularly.
musty scent of love
those old notes- yellowed,
in tatters, words smudging
I tape them carefully
to preserve them for you both
it is not quite dawn yet-
what am I doing in the wee hours
going through old letters
taking in the musty scent of your love
you know she sleeps in the next room
I don't wish to wake her up
like the way you were
ever so careful not to disturb her
what I see through my hazy vision
your words lovingly penned for her-
her words reciprocating,
my heart aches for her loss
I am no connoisseur on recipe of love
(but I know) she is still spellbound by you,
you can see that from up there,
but she cannot and that hurts her
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When I get glimpses of my mom missing my dad, it hurts me too. She is careful not to show it to me but as her daughter, I understand how much she misses him. I miss him too but it is different for her. As it should be. As it ought to be. I always have wished for a love as strong as theirs. I write it for both of them, even though I know she will not like it that I can read her so well.
May I remind you, yet again, to visit my poetry blog, rooted? Thanks!
I love this poem. I will definitely visit your poetry blog.
ReplyDeleteNice. You do have a lovely talent.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, and sweet. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThe poem is bittersweet, but, lovely.
ReplyDeleteI did visit your blog rooted, and enjoyed it. I will add it to my blogroll.
Your personal poetry teaser is beautiful. I will have to make a note to visit your poetry blog.
ReplyDeletehttp://readwithtea.blogspot.com/2010/08/tuesday-teasers.html
Beautiful poem. You have a lovely writing style.
ReplyDeletewow. thats talented!
ReplyDeleteHere's my teaser:
Teaser Tuesday #7 - Maker's Song 1- Rush of Wings
Cheers,
Dee
That is awesome. Brought tears to my eyes even before I read your insights. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWow! You are really talented. The poem is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMy teaser
http://books-love-affair.blogspot.com/2010/08/treasured-tuesdays-and-teaser-tuesdays_10.html
Misha
That was lovely! I will definitely visit your poetry blog! Thanks for sharing such a personal moment from your family.
ReplyDeleteThat resonated with me...I will definitely visit the poetry blog.
ReplyDeleteHere's my teaser:
http://rainysnowday.wordpress.com/2010/08/10/teaser-tuesdays-19/
This is really good. Thanks for sharing this with us.
ReplyDeleteOne word...beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteCMash
Beautiful poem, so heartfelt and sad but such a wonderful tribute to their love.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad this was your teaser! It's beautiful! I will definitely visit your poetry blog.
ReplyDeleteWow. I loved that. Thank you for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteYou write beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThat was a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteLovely teaser. I'll definitely be visiting your poetry blog!
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful. I could feel the emotion drawn from your mother. I almost could smell that musky scent as well.
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written.
This is a beautiful poem! You are very talented. Thank you for inviting us to your poetry blog. I'll be stopping by soon.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this lovely poem.
~ Amy
A woman of many talents!
ReplyDeleteMy teaser is here
I like your teaser idea! and great poem
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Thank you for stopping by. Mine's from The Lace Reader by Brunonia Barry.
ReplyDeleteLovely teaser! ^^ *clicks "follow"*
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by mine! :)