Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Teaser Tuesdays: musty scent of love

I thought I would do Teaser Tuesday differently today. Here I post a poem of mine, which I wrote yesterday. Yes, I do write poetry. Infact I consider myself a poet first and then anything else. Why I called this a teaser? Because I want you all to be teased enough to visit my poetry blog, rooted and read it regularly.

musty scent of love

those old notes- yellowed,
in tatters, words smudging
I tape them carefully
to preserve them for you both

it is not quite dawn yet-
what am I doing in the wee hours
going through old letters
taking in the musty scent of your love

you know she sleeps in the next room
I don't wish to wake her up
like the way you were
ever so careful not to disturb her

what I see through my hazy vision
your words lovingly penned for her-
her words reciprocating,
my heart aches for her loss

I am no connoisseur on recipe of love
(but I know) she is still spellbound by you,
you can see that from up there,
but she cannot and that hurts her

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When I get glimpses of my mom missing my dad, it hurts me too. She is careful not to show it to me but as her daughter, I understand how much she misses him. I miss him too but it is different for her. As it should be. As it ought to be. I always have wished for a love as strong as theirs. I write it for both of them, even though I know she will not like it that I can read her so well.

May I remind you, yet again, to visit my poetry blog, rooted? Thanks!

26 comments:

  1. I love this poem. I will definitely visit your poetry blog.

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  2. Nice. You do have a lovely talent.

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  3. Lovely poem, and sweet. Thank you.

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  4. This poem is very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

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  5. The poem is bittersweet, but, lovely.

    I did visit your blog rooted, and enjoyed it. I will add it to my blogroll.

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  6. Your personal poetry teaser is beautiful. I will have to make a note to visit your poetry blog.

    http://readwithtea.blogspot.com/2010/08/tuesday-teasers.html

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  7. Beautiful poem. You have a lovely writing style.

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  8. That is awesome. Brought tears to my eyes even before I read your insights. Well done!

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  9. Wow! You are really talented. The poem is beautiful.


    My teaser
    http://books-love-affair.blogspot.com/2010/08/treasured-tuesdays-and-teaser-tuesdays_10.html

    Misha

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  10. That was lovely! I will definitely visit your poetry blog! Thanks for sharing such a personal moment from your family.

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  11. That resonated with me...I will definitely visit the poetry blog.

    Here's my teaser:

    http://rainysnowday.wordpress.com/2010/08/10/teaser-tuesdays-19/

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  12. This is really good. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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  13. Beautiful poem, so heartfelt and sad but such a wonderful tribute to their love.

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  14. I'm so glad this was your teaser! It's beautiful! I will definitely visit your poetry blog.

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  15. Wow. I loved that. Thank you for sharing it.

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  16. That was a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing!

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  17. Lovely teaser. I'll definitely be visiting your poetry blog!

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  18. That was beautiful. I could feel the emotion drawn from your mother. I almost could smell that musky scent as well.
    Very beautifully written.

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  19. This is a beautiful poem! You are very talented. Thank you for inviting us to your poetry blog. I'll be stopping by soon.

    Thank you for this lovely poem.
    ~ Amy

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  20. A woman of many talents!

    My teaser is here

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  21. I like your teaser idea! and great poem

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  22. Lovely poem. Thank you for stopping by. Mine's from The Lace Reader by Brunonia Barry.

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  23. Lovely teaser! ^^ *clicks "follow"*

    Thanks for dropping by mine! :)

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